August 05, 2006

Le concept de "tu"

Tu promets beaucoup bien,
mais ne fais jamais rien.

Et tous le temps tu suppose que,
dans le mot "nous" n'existe "je".

Dans un souffle tu prends ma vie,
Je dis toujours "Ok", toujours dis "Oui".

Je me suis perdu, dans le concept de "tu".
Quand je suis trouvé? N'est pas connu.

Tr: You are good at promising much,
but you never deliver.

And all the time you assume that,
in the word "Us", "I" does not exist.

In a breath you take my life,
I always say "OK", always say "Yes".

I have lost myself in the concept of "you"
When I am found, is not known.

14 comments:

BuJ said...

hmm.. what a poem.. i don't know what to make out of it!

there is no "I" in "Us" ?

am I the only one asking? i feel kinda thick!
well whatever it is, it seems to be troubling you.
Me hopes you sort it out soon inshalla.

Shaykhspeara Sha'ira said...

Well the poem is not about me or my life although it may seem so.

There is no "I" in "Us". Meaning there is no "me" in "us". Some people think that when you are in a relationship wether a romantic or a friendly one, the two people stop being individuals and form this new collective "us" where there is no room for being "me" or "I". That is in my opinion self destructive in the end.

I hope this clarifies a bit :) I am sorry my poetry confuses you so, lol :)

uae alias said...

bravo

Shaykhspeara Sha'ira said...

Thanks alias :) How did the demonstration go? how many people showed up?

BuJ said...

man... i am gonna stick to piano....

woman.. man.. whatever!!!

yeah.. alias.. sho akhbar el mu'6ahara? check out my blog for the latest mshakel i did in london this weekend :)

Shaykhspeara Sha'ira said...

Ok man

khanana said...

very deeeeep.. very true..
i agree with you.. but promising and delivering part was confusing though :)

one may never deliver unless it is required :P

anyways.. i like it.. very well written

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